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Old 01-18-2004, 04:51 AM   #1
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Now: thoughts of it... please crtiticize

I want your thoughts on it. I wrote this out of randomness and listening to a bunch of songs and taking ideas and bits and peices from each. My inspirations and thought all came from these people...... so tell me what you think of what I've come up with so far.




It's called "NOW"

NOW

I, I'm gonna be happy now
I don't know how, but we'll see
as there's more to me in this mirror
it gets clearer and then
We shall see, we shall see, we will see.
As the fog clears the light shines thru
Bright as can be, just pure white.

Let it be, lead me, love me , you're she,
let it go. It may show in your face and expressions
times may erase your thoughts of the bad day,
and as the wind blows
away, as I walk on home, all the way as I comb,
the road with my feet indiscreet
we will meet everyday, finally , we’re elite.


Chorus:
Oh Who am I, to say how we will be
of course we'll hafta see
No, no, its not as easy as we thought
Oh it's too late, we brought
this on ourselves, and are lost
in the middle of it all
but I don't mind now


Good day people, you don’t see me yet but
I see you like a spotlight in the night,
Oh I'm happy now. I've packed, ready to roam.
Free as may be, we shall see how far I will go.
I'm free as me shall be; try, it's easily lovely
Though I do not know where to go
Who’s a friend or foe, cause its all brand new.
It’s a curvy path but straight ones are too

I'm happy now. Be happy for me
and we will see one day
all that was thought not to be
Real, fake, we know its not a mistake.
Just be happy now and if you don't know how
come here to me, in the daylight or the night
I'll help you, you're bright, hope’s in sight and now
you, you'll be happy too.
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Old 01-19-2004, 08:33 AM   #2
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You could post this in the Songbook thread...
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Old 01-19-2004, 09:03 AM   #3
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Oh, Loz.... offering your thread to all and sundry. Why not just by a white cadilac and a big furry hat and be done with it?
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Old 01-19-2004, 09:33 AM   #4
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It's just there are already a few of us who already talk about each others songs, I wouldn't call it my thread either.
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Old 01-19-2004, 09:42 AM   #5
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I meant you started the thread. And I was joking. Jeeeez, Louise.
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Old 01-20-2004, 03:13 AM   #6
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dont get too worked up cruise...oh sorry too late...
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Old 01-20-2004, 06:14 AM   #7
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What, do you bleed stupid? I said I was joking.
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Old 01-20-2004, 06:24 AM   #8
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hehe see you doing it here now. lol
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Old 01-20-2004, 06:31 AM   #9
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hehe see you doing it here now. lol



What??? I'm sorry, I don't speak moron.

Look mate, I don't want to get dragged into this. Just... hush, okay? Thanks.
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Old 01-20-2004, 06:45 AM   #10
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Leave it out Pete.
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