I'm tired of fighting
I can't go on living my lie
My days are spent dodging bullets
but i'm no superman
I'm tired of hiding away, behind my mask
watching the world go on around me
I'm not as tough as i appear to be and
I can't be strong for you anymore
I've lost the war

Chorus
I wanna live for me
Not for you
I'm gonna break away
free myself from these chains
The war has gone on for way to long inside
I'm giving up hope
I've stopped the fight

Day after day
I grow colder inside
I lose sight of where my life will lead me once i've left this place
People seem so strange
I know i've changed
i'm no longer who you depended on long ago
I've moved on
I've gone home
Maybe you should too

chorus

Bridge
Looking back
I don't know why i joined a hopeless cause
I could save you then
What makes you think i can save you now........????

Hmm. That sounds mighty farmiliar. Not the lyrics, but the style in which you wrote them. I liked it, not all rhyming but enough to keep it sounding coherant. Also a simple idea with endless possible variations incase you want to edit or rearrange.

Anyway, thats just me opinion. Thanks