Sempiternal arctic blasted winter
encompassing blizzards of perpetual frost
An ever frozen landscape of frigid marsh
Beams of light hovering over the
northern night sky ...

I give up , I'm not a poet !

I think they need you as the weather woman, we need something different than their stale language

I can just see you pointing "encompassing blizzards of perpetual frost"

I must admit I've never heard of sempiternal before. I like "An ever frozen landscape of frigid marsh" though. Keep it up!

I think that all good poetry/lyris need a message, anyone can rhyme off words (this isn't directed at you BTW).

You made my day !

uhm..your English is so much better..well you must be an english person
I don't like rhyming either, I just do it, when there's no other option.

so what does sempiternal mean?

I'm definitely not English ! The College dictionary is my friend !

Sempiternal means eternal .

Here I go again ! I will try and be more serious .

My shrouded corpse dwells underneath ,
in a frigid ditch of darkness , as you grieve
and are frightened by the reality of my death
and the vast chasm of my nothingness .
But neither barren , nor isolated , nor suffering
am I or will be . For on that day , on the
appointed time , I will experience God's light ,
Through life everlasting .

( At least I hope so ! )

Ver' nice.