I'm not really good in English, but I always right my own song, 'cause thats the only way to really express myself. So here is one:

Turbid


29 traps
I’ve fallen into
My mind will collapse
If they don’t give me a clue

So will you help me get out
With starting over
Or am I barking on the wrong door



Refr.:

Recover
My balance
I’ve got no
Apologies

A new dimension
I woke up in
I feel the tension
But I wont give myself in

Acid words that fall
They erupt on my soul
Will you be my umbrella to carry me trough this

Phoenix down

Refr.

and here's another one:

Sweet and cream, like a fragment in my mind
Sweet and cream, like the ones I can’t rewind
Cut on the dose, two’s a company, three’s a crowd
It’ nothing new, for trash like you, for trash like you

Refr. With all one’s heart and soul
Is it a friend or is it a foe
A nice reminder of a nasty mo’
Nastie mo’

You lie and you cheat, just to do what you got to do
It’s nothing new, for trash like you, for vtrash like you

Refr.


Refr.

2’s a company, 3’s a crowd, where’s the crowd
come to me
let him be

Refr.
Nanananana…

Ow, yeah...it's all protected by the government, so don't try to steal it!!

"I'm not really good in English, but I always right my own song"

That's W.R.I.T.E

master of the obvious! good job!

nice, but I wish the lyric would sound more angry and meaner. the other song is okay. but I really don't like songs that wish someone else to carry you through your personal crisis because there is really no one can help you but yourself.

keep working on it, you will get better!

nice, good to see you sharing your material. My worry 'bout posting is that someone nicks lyrics. Mind you, no-one would want to nick mine. BTW, you got phoenix down from final fantasy, right? big coincidence if not.

Here's a bit of a random question:

WW2 Italy was run by Mussolini, who invented his own title - Hitler had the same idea with fuhrer. It's Il Duce. But how do you pronounce it??? Any ideas?

Haha, you got that right, Yeah, I'm a big fan of final fantasy (I'm not a nerd! )
I have some mean songs too! I can sing like someone hast just ripped my body appart or something... I'm sorry Its WRITE!! :-p

First I wabted o wright songs in dutch, 'cause then I can express myself better, but I have so many friends in England and Australia...they wouldn't understand it. And also...I think it's much more fun writing in English, I don't know why...maybe 'cause it's more universal than dutch...

write in dutch, why not? if your friends want to know the meaning, they can always get a dictionary or you can do a translation for them.