Well between the two I like Just Came better. But I'll start with All I want,

Simplfy on some parts, it can get dizzying. Good ideas but break them up.

I think the chorus could use a bit more of a change then just adding the guitar line. It seems like it needs more of a bite then the funky/bouncy bass.

Clearly I can see your love for g-funk coming in but I think you should make it crisper some how since the beats sound a little dated or in some low quality format.

We Just Came is better song writing and the beat is more with the times, reminds me of Crazy off the new snoop.

Your flow is riding those beats and thats great, even if someone doesn't like the song much you can get into it if its performed live or something.


Now I don't want you to get offended by this since you've got some great potential and your one of the better people that has come here plugging their myspace. But your funk knowledge seems confined to a p-funk best of judging by the beats, where g-funk started, but I think you could do better.

Thanks Just. No offense taken. What do you mean "your funk knowledge seems confined to a p-funk best of judging by the beats"?

I'm always interested in trying new things with my music.

Check out my soundclick here (got 4 beats that I'm either in the process of selling or that are for sale with more on the way)
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=694832

Thanks again

TT

I liked most of what was on your soundclick page better then the myspace stuff.

What I was trying to get at with the funk comment was that your beats are very similar to p-funk sampled g-funk. I think if you want to really make it in the rap world today you need to go beyond just that since its been done so many times before. I know your into the g-funk stuff but you if your gonna keep doing it in that style you need to come up with new twists on it.

You seem to be into the funk and I think most people just stop with the hits especially when it comes to p-funk since some of their songs can get pretty weird. You've got potential when it comes to writing out the songs but I think you can get more creative when it comes to the choice of sounds.

good feedback dude - I've been thinking that for a while now.

Thanks for checkin it out.