The first verse just came out one day and the rest slowly followed. Give me what you've got.


(verse 1)
When the wings broke down / You should of took it as a sign / God created pardon / Yet revenge controls your mind / Whether love can tame your heart / Remains to be seen / Your latest episode / Damaged my belief / Swallowed by the unconscious man / The virus repels the cure / Wandering in No Man’s Land is / The only ever after you’ll adore

(chorus)
Wait till winter dominates
You’ll forget the summer
Forget the summer
Wait for our lives to separate
You’ll forget the ladder
Forget the ladder
Your stuck on the ground

(verse 2)
When the rain poured down / You should of ran for your life / Tried to reach the garden / Yet The Devil plays with your mind / Whether you do have a choice / Refuses to be seen / Your recent show and tell / Still haunts all my dreams / Cursed by an angel’s hand / On the locked side of the door / Since you’ve had a taste for blood / You’re crying out for more

(chorus)

(bridge 1)
Hush now baby / Don’t close your eyes / Hush now baby / Savor the light / Rolling on the highway / Baby’s got a long way to drive / Stuck between heaven and hell / Where you gonna fly / Broken soul scattered in the inside / The pieces cut you down / I was a lost girl, but now I am found

(bridge 2)
Clean up the mess you left, before you go away / Clean up the mess you left, before you enter night or day

(chorus 2)
I’ll wait till your heart betrays
You’ll forget the summer
Forget the summer
I’ll wait while my cloud elevates
You’ll forget the ladder
Forget the ladder

(orginal chorus)

Will you wave goodbye to the sun

that's really quite nice... are we meant to post opinions?

im told im good at poems although i think i make some terrible ones... :S

Thanks... YES!!! I want feedback. Do you have any poems you can show me?