(Kind of hard to explain how this works, just know that after the / in the line it is a backround narration read by my friend in some strand killer voice, sounds cool and echoed later)

Insomnia/ ah ah ahaha

Try to get some sleep/You can't

The torment you feel is... is.... is..../ is me!

Murderous thoughts run through your sick mind
Falling and dying to all of mankind/ahhhhhhhhhh

You scream and you shout or so you would think
The only sound made is the sound of the sink/drip drip drip

Thoughts and your fears are in your head now
You kick and you punch and you wonder how/how did i get this way

You stop and you think and you then realize
The only way out is to commit suicide

Falling so deeply into the abyss
Slipping and sliding to nothingness/yeah

/mumbling in tongues

you've got (splash cymbals) INSOMNIA

you are still awake

you've got (cymbal crash) Sleep Phobia

Decide to take your life

Repeatedly:
you've got/laughing

good work!

thanks, good to know someone liked it a little

well, I hear music in it. music isn´t so fucking perfect. as long as it flows and has a meanin. I think this does!

shit, kinda dissapointed there was no feedback, can someone please tell me what they think of it

I wish I could hear it

its so damn hard to judge these songs without the music, this could either be a really cool song that would totally kick ass or just be some death metal cliche flop. i like the lyrics, i use to struggle with insomnia so i can relate. i give it 7 out of 10

no bullshit death metal, bands that play death metal and i am able to listen to are hit and miss, with about 100000 misses for every hit, so i dont go close to that shit