if life was easier
maybe i'd realize
people will move in and out of my life

if life were easier
maybe i'd see
some answers are right in front of my eyes

if life were easier
maybe i'd allude
to all the things we used to do

but i can't because it hurts too much
i'm wrong, i'm sorry
i won't bother you anymore
i miss your simple touch
i miss your mumbled whispers
i wish you still had the feelings you used to have in store

if life were like that time i thought i was with you
it would've sucked
i would've waited all day but end up nothing more than a hummock

if life were like the nights i hurt you
i'd have been nicer
but instead i was an asshole and my alienation left you awestruck

if life made time travel easier
that's what i'd do
and i'd find a way to stay with you

(chorus)

don't come back
i need you again
it might be better if we stayed friends
don't come back
i need you again
fine leave me here to find my own end
if i could read minds it might be easier
but i can't, so die

FUCK LOVE AND FUCK WRITING ABOUT NOTHING BUT IT


eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexpan d

cool man!

sounds good.
work on the grammar. tweak the words.
make em fit even better. unless you sing it and post it so we can hear the result.
when words are unsung I read lyrics as poetry.

and it feels like it needs MORE.
more of a story. you could even make it more dramatic withouth writing dramatic words.
get me?

anyway.. good work.
6+ by now

Nice work.

Alien Music: http://www.mynameisphil.com

sorry guy, im a teenager, which means im charged by emotions lyrically, also because of my old school influences, but my other stuff is political, but its rap, so yeah, w/e

cmon, you know you love it, forgive me for rapping, but it gets stuff across fast and easily, and effectively, etc.

what are you gonna do like run where theres nowhere to run to hide from whatever you lied to because of the obligatory terms and lives that you collide through and its not easy but you cant give up cuz one day it sucks and you're bucked by the bronco get back up pronto or be stopped onto, but youll probably still be within the reach of an arms throw, and ill catch you, another batch is probably all you need to hatch into because you can do what you want within reason, its not miracle season, nor will it ever be ecstasy, because the best of me shines through with adversity and perplexity, complexity is easier to see when you rub your eyes clear of the dirt, no matter how much it hurts, itll feel better, and youll be better for the weather whether or not we're birds of a feather, i'll help put your life back together

the first song was kinda cliche, just one of those ones youd like the first time you hear it then just be like ok thats so not cool anymore. theres some good rap out there, but most of it inluding your little ditty just sounds like a bunch of overaged druggies that are totally obsessed with Dr Suess. i heard some rap song (if that isnt an oxymoron i dont know what is) where the dude tried to rhyme the word shotgun with shotgun. come on now. i have to say though theres a lot of people that suck a lot more than you that are rich off it so whatever.