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Old 12-04-2004, 08:37 PM   #1
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Pathway--honest critique

Pathway

One Blink
And it fades away

That life you led
Now dead

Sail to the dark side
This place has waited; your destiny in motion

The dark weathered pathway before you
Conceived from within--behold your sin…





The life you lived
The time you loved
The place you knew
The fate of your life seated before you

This undeniable path lies true
This place has waited




Your life
Gone to nothing

Illusions of choice
From a god with no rejoice

Climb to the light
This place doesn’t wait; bring your illusions to reality


Fight-
Give in (this part would be sung with alot of emphisis for each word, then "step"wold be dragged out.)

Deny-
Accept
Don’t take one more step

Sail away,
Sail away

From the dark path conceived within
Sail away from your sin
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Old 12-04-2004, 10:34 PM   #2
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I would need to hear the music to really know what I think about this. The lyric seems well structured.

The line "a god with no rejoice" confuses me. I assume you are using the verb "rejoice" as a noun intentionally. The other lines are pretty clear in their meaning, so what does this particular line mean?
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Old 12-04-2004, 11:49 PM   #3
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Well, to me god isn't nice like people say. I used "...no rejoice" because god has no joy, no gladness..therefor god can't expell it to others because god doesn't have it himself.

basically this song is about your destiny or "pathway" thats supposedly given to you. But I believe you can make up any path you want, you choose it. If you don't like the one your on turn it around, climb to that light and take the chance before it's too late...or sail to the dark side.
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