I would just like some feedback on some songs I have written. [You can download the songs by clicking on the title]
The first song I am posting here is a song that one of my mates thinks is a very hard hitting one:
A Painful Reminder
Opening the cold door
Into someone's mind
Isn't always what you
Expected to find
Darkness can entrap you
Deep within the grief
Never to escape
Forever we will lay
If only they had been
Driving at a normal speed
Our lives would not have
Upturned and folded
Death on four wheels
Corners much too tight
15%, "Down it in one"
"I thought it was left, not right?"
Wake up in a cold sweat
As the darkness turns to light
You restlessly remember
That painful, looming night
Slip into the back seat
The journey's fast and fun
White powder falls like snow
And soon the journey's done
If only they had been
Driving at a normal speed
Our lives would not have
Upturned and folded
Death on four wheels
Corners much too tight
15%, "Down it in one"
"I thought it was left, not right?"
Another song is one of my personal favourites called:
Caught In A Reverie
Stuck in deep thought
One thought: drifting
Painless though it may seem
But the world is passing by
Paranoia fills me complete
Many thoughts: lingering
Stuck in a circle, round and round
I'm caught in a reverie
The sleeping town so peaceful
But restlessly I contemplate
Everything and nothing
Cannot wake from this trance
Forever and a day
One thought: fixed
Life has passed me by
Cannot wake from this reverie!
More Songs Here
