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11-14-2004, 04:52 PM
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Song 'No part of you'
Ok, this is another song I came up with playing around with various chords for my last song. It's unfinished (appologies in advance), however heres a taste. Comments would be appreciated. Thanks.
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It's taken all away
The passions slipped out and it's right before you
It happens every year
Like a regular rut that's stuck with strong glue.
It don't get easier.
Living in an ocean where the fish aint fond of you.
Life ain't no part of you.
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11-14-2004, 08:54 PM
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Quite possibley nothing.
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Michigan
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Not bad I like it 
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11-21-2004, 08:24 PM
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Many thanks for the feedback Staley.
I'm a bit dissapointed in the forum to be honest, considering the lack of feedback.
Where is the best forum for songwriting?
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