This is my first post here. I've searched the Internet for forums of this sort, but I've only managed to find Jesus Worshipping sites until now. lol

Currently in production, my song 'Section 5' dedicated to those females I've had relationships with and have turned out to be complete phsycopaths.

It probably isn't worth posting as it is nowhere near finished. I have the first verse to show to you all anyways (the chorus is pretty lame so far) and hopefully you can get a taste of my work from it. I'd like some critique too!

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'Section 5' Verse 1 (Guitar only Am & F for verse)

They're taking you to Section 5
Soft Walls and Floor keep you alive
Did you stop and wonder why
How whispered thoughts could make you cry?
We battled through, we fought the war
But was it all worth fighting for
You've chose your path, walked through your door
You'll see me in your thoughts you hoe.

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Part of Chorus

Take your mind to another time
When we sat all alone in our own space biding our time
Move your mind to another life
I can't smash down your walls for the fear of what's behind.

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Comment would be appreciated.

Thanks