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Old 09-28-2004, 03:19 AM   #1
teddy07
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rape me!

I'm back! after a year of absence. I've been down in my basement writing...

everybody is home playing with their rubber duck
so you're stuck
everybody went playing with the rubber duck
now you're stuck
bathing in the tub without the rubber duck

home, walking high around in the bathrobe
keeping out the cold with lies you've been told
bothered n smothered by all the carefree
thinking when will you're road meet
to find the one you seek

alone and unwell
head out of place you just wanna yell
nobody tells nobody tells
it's time to take on the road
let it take you home

everybody is home playing with their rubber duck
so you're stuck
everybody went playing with the rubber duck
now you're stuck
bathing in the tub without the rubber duck

home, alone walking around in hopes
seeking the one to take you home
alone n ready to unfold into hands
you want to feel the promised land
make up that man

give it all you can this is planned
every thought thru yeah you can

everybody is home playing with their rubber duck
bathing in the tub without the rubber duck



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Old 10-04-2004, 11:30 PM   #2
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That took you a year........ wow, what a waste of time....
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Old 10-04-2004, 11:42 PM   #3
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That took you a year........ wow, what a waste of time....

hehe, not really. why? since I havent posted?

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Old 10-15-2004, 12:28 AM   #4
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well, I think your poem is delightfully seductive!
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Old 10-15-2004, 12:43 AM   #5
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well, I think your poem is delightfully seductive!

thanks dude
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Old 11-01-2004, 10:14 PM   #6
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That took you a year........ wow, what a waste of time....


your a penis wrinkle sir
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Old 11-02-2004, 10:32 PM   #7
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good lyrics are really really hard to write, at least for me
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Old 11-04-2004, 10:27 PM   #8
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I think it is very respectable...I think it's actually pretty good.
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Old 11-04-2004, 10:28 PM   #9
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your a penis wrinkle sir

...ditto.
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Old 11-10-2004, 04:30 AM   #10
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To be brutally honest ... I don't really like it at all.
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