Sorry I dont like it either, It has no meaning at all. Very random, not my style.

Phil

sounds pretty good, but I guess I'd actually hear being played to see if I liked it.

take out all that rubber duck crap, and its alright

Leaving about two lines...

How could you not rhyme duck with suck, fuck and chuck???

No need to! hehe

here`s the rewritten original.

everybody is home playing their own songs
you`re somewhat stuck
everybody went playing out playing along
but you`re still stuck
playing your song nobody to tag along
you`re so alone

home, walking around being high
keeping out the cold with lies you've been told
bothered and smothered by all the carefree
your battleship is sinking your hopeful thinking


alone and unwell
head out of place you just wanna yell
nobody tells nobody tells
it's time to take on the road
let it take you where it may

everybody is home playing their own songs
you`re somewhat stuck
everybody went playing out playing along
but you`re still stuck
playing your song nobody to tag along
you`re so alone

home, alone walking around in hopes
seeking the one to take you home
alone and ready to unfold your hands
you want to feel the promised land
make up that man

WTF? Are you serious? lol

both of your song are crap
go get a life and do something

YOU SUCK!!!!!!!

What's your problem?
This song doesn't suck at all. If you want a sucky song go listen to the Spice Girls.

You are free to have an opinion. But if you don't have anything else to say than it sucks. then please don't post.
But if you feel you have anything smart to say, or want to critisize my work in a serious manner then do that. Don't post shit just for the hell of it.
And btw, the song isn't serious.