Heres the first verse to a song I'm writing. I'm not a rapper, I usually write r&b but I can rap. You should check out some of my responses to some people in the rap battle arena.
Victim number one

victim number 2

He came up to the mic, check one two one two and checked it twice. Then the Dj started to spin. At that momment the emcee started to spit. For your precaution I'd take three to four steps back. Since my words are weapons like the empire they'll strike back. And I dont need two guns I shoot rhymes all day and the only ammo I need is a record on the tray. Your rhymes are like bebes you fire and they miss. Thats why its so easy to turn your words into a diss. Yea I guess you could say my words are grenades. Because as soon as I spit one it'll blow up in your face. But dont listen ot these people your not a discrace. Its just im so much better thats why this battles just a waste.

Not my greatest work, but I think its good. Please leave all oppinions.